Shreetej, Your presentation was so in depth and had so many different layers and factors to it I don't even know where to start. Well, first of all, you sounded very professional when giving your presentation. If you were nervous, it didn't come through at all. Honestly, I was very impressed with the books you read because the way you explained them, they sounded very hard to follow let alone to deconstruct the way you did so you should be very proud of yourself on that note. The satire, allusions, free indirect discourse, and restriction on character developement examples you found within you text were all top notch and masterfully explained. I learned a lot more than I thought I would during your presentation and it was definitely a good review for me in some literary terms. Each and every one of your slides had so much detail and them and anyone could tell the amount of hard work and research you put into your topic. All I could say is to try to sound a little more enthused about your work, I know inside you obviously were because just look at the tremendous amount of work that went into your presentation. Outwardly though, you seemed to drone on a little so my only suggestion would be to put a little more pep into your demeanor. Excellent work though!
Your presentation had so much detail and information and was very interesting! With all of the information you provided, it showed how you know so much about your author and the book you read. You did a very good job presenting all of your information. Your presentation flowed very well together and was easy to follow because of the order of the way you presented things. I also really liked the opening question of your presentation. It was very interesting to consider and think about and helped engage your audience. I also really liked how when you brought up each of the points that you argued, you provided a lot of contextual evidence to help prove your point. Your powerpoint was very well put together and the order in which you talked about things flowed really well together and helped keep the readers engaged throughout your presentation. Something that you could improve on is explaining the more complex ideas that you mentioned throughout your presentation. It was a bit hard to follow at times because a lot of people have not heard of some of the things that you mentioned within your presentation so it would be much easier to understand if you explained those things a bit more clearly. Other than that, you did a really good job at conveying your argument and presenting it to the class and I really enjoyed listening to it!
Shreetej,
ReplyDeleteYour presentation was so in depth and had so many different layers and factors to it I don't even know where to start. Well, first of all, you sounded very professional when giving your presentation. If you were nervous, it didn't come through at all. Honestly, I was very impressed with the books you read because the way you explained them, they sounded very hard to follow let alone to deconstruct the way you did so you should be very proud of yourself on that note.
The satire, allusions, free indirect discourse, and restriction on character developement examples you found within you text were all top notch and masterfully explained. I learned a lot more than I thought I would during your presentation and it was definitely a good review for me in some literary terms.
Each and every one of your slides had so much detail and them and anyone could tell the amount of hard work and research you put into your topic.
All I could say is to try to sound a little more enthused about your work, I know inside you obviously were because just look at the tremendous amount of work that went into your presentation. Outwardly though, you seemed to drone on a little so my only suggestion would be to put a little more pep into your demeanor.
Excellent work though!
Your presentation had so much detail and information and was very interesting! With all of the information you provided, it showed how you know so much about your author and the book you read. You did a very good job presenting all of your information. Your presentation flowed very well together and was easy to follow because of the order of the way you presented things. I also really liked the opening question of your presentation. It was very interesting to consider and think about and helped engage your audience. I also really liked how when you brought up each of the points that you argued, you provided a lot of contextual evidence to help prove your point. Your powerpoint was very well put together and the order in which you talked about things flowed really well together and helped keep the readers engaged throughout your presentation. Something that you could improve on is explaining the more complex ideas that you mentioned throughout your presentation. It was a bit hard to follow at times because a lot of people have not heard of some of the things that you mentioned within your presentation so it would be much easier to understand if you explained those things a bit more clearly. Other than that, you did a really good job at conveying your argument and presenting it to the class and I really enjoyed listening to it!
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